My first email
Dear Mr. Hernandez
I’m writing this email, because the date of the meeting I’m going to travel to Mexico for personal reasons, Therefore we change the meeting the last monday 23 of march at 10:00 am. Beforehand an apologize for all the staff for the change.Regards.
Pamela M.
Corrections:
ResponderEliminarI’m writing this email, because the date of the meeting I’m going to travel to Mexico for personal reasons, Therefore we change the meeting the last monday 23 of march at 10:00 am. Beforehand an apologize for all the staff for the change.
Regards.
- no contractions
- the message is not very clear and some points are repeated (double apology)
- wrong punctuation (capitals)
- format
>>> Pamela M.